kind of sums I how I’m feeling today. Hopefully this coffee will wake me up. One thing I’m going to try is once I put more hours in, like that’s ever going to happen anytime soon, is to ask Rob for a lr-letter of recommendation, after I put more hours in. There’s no immediate rush to do this on my part at the moment. Basically Rob will ask why and get all worried. Then as soon as we get hit with that first rental increase I’ll be asking for that $3/hour more raise in pay.

I finally broke down and read the first 2 scenes of F. It’s the rough draft, what can I say? I’ll read again as I go along. I corrected some obvious errors. I saw fractions of words without vowels in them, that sort of thing and lots of misspelled words as well. Also I noticed way to many passive words and not enough action verbs. The story moves well enough although I could make it stronger but this isn’t what the first pass is all about.

e. Jim